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Fri, Oct. 1st, 2010, 11:35 pm
mozartzbitch: (no subject)

I do find amusement in blog sites I join that I feel like the only one who posts in. But as even I am only posting the second entry anyone has had on this group this calendar year and only the second since 2008 I just saw, here goes. Maybe this will get other fellow former users of this grou posting again.

I had a bit of a creative need tonight so I put together this poem on internal righteouness. Inpput would be much obliged.

Within each sin
May I begin
To ask if wrong or right
If good be so
Pray, let me know
For be a sin, it might

For when I ask
If any task
Is sin or if it’s just
The answer may
To the mind say
What I wish though not must

Until you ask
About my task
So that inside, I’ll see
The truth all bare
For inside there
I’ll know it morally

For good or sin
Both lie within
The heart of one whose choice
Is up to be
What he or she
Will condemn or rejoice

Thu, Feb. 18th, 2010, 10:12 am
mozartzbitch: Geez, this group's been empty for a while!

Okay, so the post I'm about to put here is identical to the one I just posted on my own entries, so I'm just gonna put it in cut form. But honestly, I'd like some input for anyone reading this, because I think this might be kind of fun.
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Mon, May. 5th, 2008, 12:33 pm
mozartzbitch: Everyone please read this! I've gotten back into writing some poetry, but I need input badly

 So I know it seems as though no one uses this lj group anymore, but I still do once upon a blue moon like right now.  But I wrote this new Ballad in a series of Ballads known as "The Heroes's Laments".  I need some input, so pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeee reply, some peple.  So here is my first one, entitled,:

The Bat and the Boy

 

I.

 

‘Tis but a child who breathes of Gotham air

Who sees a Bat, his fate now to declare

To protect all of righteousness out there

For good citizen’s, servitude he’ll bear

 

To evil’s surprise

The hero doth rise

From the good will’s cries

 

The suit of courage does the hero wear

The mask of vengeance through which his foes stare

Will strike fear and shame into evil’s lair

And provide as the common good’s heir

 

For all evil’s eyes

The Bat signal flies

Through the Gotham skies

 

Now all villains of this land must beware

For one masked man emerges to repair

A lost city, yet still located where

Honesty and truth may still take care

 

Through all tyrants’ tries

They won’t capit’lize

Good will mesmerize

 

II

 

In time, another young boy will learn hate

And ask the Bat to help him find his fate

For he knows that hatred’s strength can be great

But not all shields can this power slate

 

On destiny’s hill

The grown Bat can still

Help the boy fulfill

 

For vengeance, the Bat knows the boy must wait

And still become a hero, not irate

But one of bravery he must relate

To fighting for the good while not too late

His youth, he shan’t kill

His hate shall not spill

But stay in good will

 

The boy becomes the Bat’s Robin and mate

The now two heroes together create

A bonded pair of comrades in a true state

Of loyalty no force can penetrate

 

Loyalty ne’er ill

The heroes shall fill

Good unity’s trill


Sun, Nov. 11th, 2007, 01:15 pm
mozartzbitch: (no subject)

Greetings readers. I wrote this on my own page yesterday, but wanted more people to discuss this thought of mine with, so here it is.

Since most you who actually know who I am have me on your friends list anyway, I put it this time in cut form to avoid dominatn
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Mon, Sep. 10th, 2007, 12:44 pm
octaveleap: Out of context.....

THE OUT OF CONTEXT VERSION

Me: I'll sit on the toilet because I love you.
Liz: And that's how we potty trained Katie.

THE IN CONTEXT VERSION

Me: (leaves the bathroom.)
Liz: (putting on makeup) You abandoned me.
Me: Yeah, 'cause I don't want to sit on your stinky toilet.
Liz: You can bring the computer in here!
Me: Fine, I'll sit on the toilet. Because I love you.
Liz: Out of context that could be very funny.
Me: Well, I suppose. I mean - I'll sit on the toilet because I love you...
Liz: "How we Potty Trained Katie."

Mon, Sep. 10th, 2007, 12:56 am
surreal_saetan: wow, it's been a while

it's been so long...

i had a customer today who was angry at me when i wouldn't allow her to return a product. she glared at me when i said i couldn't return it for her.

customer : *angrily* but it didn't work!
me : *patiently* yes, ma'am. but the bottle is empty.

i was sad that she left before i could offer to recycle it for her and give her five cents.

"hey jude,
don't make it bad.
take a sad song,
and make it better"

Wed, May. 30th, 2007, 08:44 am
mozartzbitch: And another chapter

Here's another chapter I shall post now which I also just completed. I think it's best if I actually get a little bit into who Ashley is I have only written one previous scene with her in which she is not significant anyway. Granted, I don't intend on developing her too much in the book, but I do have some aspects of her past which I will broaden on in the book. All I will mention about her right now is that she and Tommy went to school together long before also attending high school together. He had a gigantic crush on her throughout elementary school and middle school until rumors started spreadig that she liked him back. She thus had to turn on him coldly beyond belief to prove that this was not true. There's more to it I'll put in detail when I get to it in the book, but for now, here's an introduction to hoer outcome at the end of high school.
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Wed, May. 30th, 2007, 08:33 am
mozartzbitch: The Funeral

Okay friends. For those of you on this hug_ninjas_lair who are unaware I am the one who has been posting under the username aliensnlove . I merely realized that many of these readers on this group, namely losthitsuzen and likely others had no idea who that poster was. But alas, it is I. I am clarifying that for I shall now no longer post on this under that username. That user shall be purely for my own literary works and other random pieces of writing. For now however, I have continued working on my novel "I Must Be An Alien" and the writing I have completed in the last 48 hours seriously need critiquing. Any critiques are more than welcome. Please note however, that this chapter may require you to read two previous chapters which are posted on the entries for aliensnlove . If you do wish to read previous chapters to see what this chapter is referring to, the two previous chapters you will want to read will include "A Dark Night" and "A Spoiled Reunion". In the meantime however, here is "The Truth about Funerals".
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